原圆高中英语名师工作室
在英语高考题型的读后续写中，结尾部分起到了至关重要的作用。它不仅是对前文内容的总结、强调主题，在必要时更是对主题的升华，给读者留下思考和启示。2024年5月27日下午，原圆名师工作室学员张晨芳就“读后续写六大主题与结尾升华”做了小专题讲座。本专题就读后续写六大主题及相应的结尾升华进行总结。
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命题分析
主题提炼
讲座开始，主讲老师张晨芳分析了主题提炼需要注意的几个方面并就此提出了今天要讲到的的六大主题。
主题分析
1. 在确定故事主题前，有必要仔细阅读篇章。注意人物、行动以及整个故事中展开的事件。
2. 主题是贯穿整篇文章的重复想法或主题。寻找在整篇文章中出现的想法或概念的模式或重复。
3. 文章中的人物通常可以提供主题的线索。思考他们的立场、挣扎和价值观。他们在整个故事中学到了什么?
4. 故事的背景也可以提供主题的线索。考虑位置、时间段和社会背景如何有助于整体信息的传达。
5. 故事的中心冲突通常围绕主题展开。人物面临的主要问题是什么?有什么风险?
6. 作者在关于社会、人性或整个世界方面想要表达什么?作者通过故事试图传达什么信息?
六大主题
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结尾升华
接着，张晨芳老师在针对以上六大主题书写结尾时，指出我们要保持与全文主题的连贯性并建议学生注意以下几点：
简洁明了
结尾部分应避免冗长的叙述，用简短的语言表达深刻的观点。
突出主题
结尾句应紧扣文章主题，对主题进行深入的阐述和升华。
留下启示
通过结尾句，引导读者思考，激发读者的思考和感悟。
语言优美
运用修辞手法，如比喻、排比等，使结尾句更具文学性，增加感染力。
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高分句式
张老师在最后给大家总结了针对这六大主题相应的高分句型。
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1.善举助人型
From then on + 行动
1.From then on, I made up my mind to pass on “love” to others（传递爱给其他人）. Just as a saying goes : “ Roses given, fragrance in hand（赠人玫瑰，手有余香）. ”
2.From that day on, every time I meet someone who needs help, I always reach out to them, hoping to pass on the kindness （希望传递善意）that Mexican family offered me.
感悟
3.It is love that makes the world go round（是爱让世界运转）and Bernard felt it deep in his little heart
4.Sometimes, a small act of kindness may be powerful enough to make a huge difference
动作+感动+感悟
It dawned on me that a moment of kindness could mean so much to another, and that a simple act could make the world so much better.
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个人成长类
学习知识促“改变”
It’s never too late to learn. Each individual has the right to accept more challenges and make more attempts.学习永远为时不晚。每个人都应该并且有权利去接受更多的挑战，做更多的尝试。
发挥天赋促“改变”
Actually, every individual possesses talent. Be brave when you find it and also make efforts. You can create miracles in the end.
事实上，每个人都有天赋，发现它的时候要勇敢，也要付出努力，最终你会创造奇迹。
追逐梦想促“改变”
It’s never too late to go for your dream. As long as you grasp every opportunity and take full advantage of it, you will stand a chance to realize your dreams.
追梦永远不晚。只要你抓住机会，充分利用机会，你就有机会实现梦想。
克服困难促“改变”
The journey to success is not smooth. It is full of challenges and difficulties. We should be brave to face them. As long as we don’t give up hope and make every effort to overcome all the difficulties, we will surely achieve our goal/success finally.
通往成功的路不会平坦，充满挑战和艰辛。我们要勇敢面对。只要不放弃希望并竭尽全力克服所有困难，我们最终会实现我们的目标。
战胜恐惧促“改变”
Determination and optimism are what it takes to conquer your fear and accomplish your goal.
战胜恐惧和实现目标，需要决心和乐观。
战胜自卑促“改变”
I smiled as I eventually realized the real source of confidence.Now, I am proud of what I look like and much happier, because I have realized it is your personality that decides who you truly are.
我笑了，因为我最终意识到了自信的真正来源。现在，我为我的样子感到骄傲，而且更快乐，因为我已经意识到，决定你真正是谁的是你的个性。
战胜消极促“改变”
Attitude is more important than facts for us. We cannot change our past; we cannot change the fact. However, the only thing we can do is hold a positive attitude.
态度对我们来说比事实更重要。 我们不能改变我们的过去；我们不能改变事实。然而，我们唯一能做的就是保持积极的态度。
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脱困类故事
结果+难忘的经历+体悟
Finally, we did sth. What an unforgettable experience! It turns out that there’s always a way out of any dilemma as long as we stay calm / never give up hope / unite together.
最后，我们做某事。多么难忘的经历啊！事实证明，只要我们保持冷静/ 不放弃希望 / 团结一致，就总有办法摆脱困境。
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人与社会类
亲情：父母
Everyone has one person they look up to as a role model. To me there is none other than my mom. Without her in my life, I would have no idea whether I can do sth. When I am older and had children of my own, I hope I can be just as great a parent as my mom.
每个人都有一个他们崇拜的榜样。对我来说没有别人，只有我妈妈。如果我的生活中没有她，我将不知道我是否能做某事。当我长大了，有了自己的孩子，我希望我能像我妈妈一样伟大。
感悟：意识到…
It was on that very day that I truly realized the value of sincerity and honesty in friendship.
在那一天,我真正意识到真诚和诚实在友谊中的价值。
It was on that very day that I truly realized the most important thing in life is to spend time with family.
就在那一天，我真正意识到生命中最重要的事情就是和家人在一起。
比喻
It dawned on me that one loyal friend is worth ten thousand relatives.
一个忠诚的朋友抵得上成千上万的亲戚。
That affection towards our family is like a touch of green tea, refreashing and heartwarming.
那份亲情像一抹清茶，沁人心脾，温暖人心。
画面定格
Time seemed to pause/stop to witness the touching moment.
时间似乎停下来见证这动人的一刻。
Speechless and happy, she held her son tightly to her arms, with tears welling up in her eyes.
她高兴得说不出话来，把儿子紧紧地抱在怀里，眼里噙满了泪水。
Despite the chill autumn wind, their home was filled with the warmth of love and reunion.
尽管秋风凛冽，他们的家还是充满了爱和团圆的温暖
对话结尾
So as soon as the plane landed I called him and said, “Luke, that was such a wonderful thing you did for me. Thank you.”
所以飞机一着陆，我就给他打电话说:“卢克，你为我做的事太棒了。谢谢你。”
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趣事型
1.Dad’s calm smile reflected his motto “All’s well with us, never fear.”爸爸平静的微笑反映了他的座右铭”一切都好，永远不要害怕。”
2.It was the first time that I had truly realized the meaning of patience.这是我第一次真正意识到耐心的意义。
3.We usually take life for granted, but the story shows us that there is always beauty in our heart.我们通常认为生活是理所当然的，但这个故事告诉我们，在我们的心中永远有美丽。
4.The words brought warmth to my heart and tears to my eyes. I felt lucky to be a part of this mischievous yet loving family.这些话让我心中满是温暖，也让我热泪盈眶。我很幸运能成为这个淘气而又充满爱的家庭的一员。
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人与动物类
首尾呼应
开头 ：I had an interesting childhood. It was filled with surprise and amusements, all because of my mother–loving, sweet, yet absent-minded and forgetful.
我有一个有趣的童年，充满了惊喜和娱乐，都是因为我的母亲——可爱，却心不在焉，健忘。
结尾：Despite mom’s being absent-minded and forgetful, she was still a kind and nice mom. 尽管妈妈总是心不在焉，健忘，但她仍然是一个和蔼可亲的妈妈。
开头：A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day.
一天，亚瑟在上班的路上发生了一件有趣的事情
结尾：What a funny day. Arthur couldn’t stop laughing whenever he looked back on this hilarious（/hɪˈlɛərɪəs/ 令人捧腹大笑的）experience.
多么有趣的一天啊，每当亚瑟回想起这次欢乐的经历，他就忍不住笑个不停。
距离高考不足十天，对于有些题型已经无力弥补。但对于英语写作这种需要积累和记忆的东西，正是提分的好时机。希望这个小专题能给各位即将参加高考的考生以启发，在六月的高考中考出满意的成绩。
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