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在考研冲刺的最后阶段,伟哥为各位同学精心准备了21考研十篇预测范文。就像我在视频里说的,历年真题作文是基础。其次就是,一定要准备好预备话题的语料素材。只要不离社会主义核心价值观,无论考到什么话题,都能用上!
这些分类话题内容提供了明确的预测方向,提供了标准的范文。在你们上考场前,按部就班地看完,伟哥能做的只有这些了。
TOPIC
热点话题一:生活方式
近年来,一些年轻人的生活方式一直被社会议论,屡次登上热搜,各种段子层出不穷:“用最贵的护肤品,熬最晚的夜”、“喝不加糖的奶茶”、“雪糕是凉的,哪有热量”……如果在考场上遇到类似的话题,我们应该如何完成一篇高分作文呢?
Directions:
Write an essay of 160—200 words based on the following picture. In your essay, you should
1)describe the picture briefly,
2)interpret the meaning, and
3)give your comments.
You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)
● 思路分析 ●
首段主要引出话题、描述图画和指出寓意。描述图中女士的关键信息有:吃减肥药、吃垃圾食品和安慰自己减肥一定可以成功。考生在描述时要将上述信息的逻辑关系捋顺。寓意的写法决定中间段的展开模式。如果将寓意写为“该图反映了一种……现象”,中间段最好分析该现象出现的原因;若将寓意写为“该图反映了一种……观点”,中间段则最好通过推理、举例等方式证明或反驳这个观点。
范文将寓意写为“该图反映了一种不好的现象”——有人釆用不恰当的减肥方式。中间段可以分析这一现象出现的原因,比如垃圾食品的诱惑力、减肥者急于求成的心理、减肥产品广告夸大宣传等。也可选择其中一种原因,拓展更多细节。本篇范文就“减肥者急于求成的心理”这一原因进行了拓展。
在最后一段,考生可以首先阐述“减肥者急于求成”的弊端, 比如达不到减肥效果,进一步损害身体等。接下来针对前文提出的弊端、现象成因等,倡导合理的方式, 呼吁树立合理观念,言之有理即可。
● 参考范文 ●
How to keep fit has increasingly become the main subject of many modern artworks. In the picture above, lady is having a meal including pizza, cola, and doughnuts. She is also taking a pill labeled “Special Drug for Weight Loss”. thinking she would be thinner soon. The cartoonist intends to draw public attention to a self-deceiving way of losing weight popular among young people.
Many factors have contributed to the phenomenon, but one in particular stands out. In recent years, youngsters have shown a growing eagerness for quick success. Undergraduates hope to land a well-paid job upongraduation while new employees desire to become rich overnight. When people with this mentality seek to loseweight, they tend to take weight-losing drugs or to adopt measures that they believe produce results quickly.
However, this quick-success attitude can hardly help people slim down. Worse, because these people have every confidence in the drugs, they may eat more junk food and thus have a greater risk of diseases such as high blood pressure and fatty liver. Therefore, we should encouroage young people to eat less sugar and salt and to spend more time on outdoor activities. Yet, the long-term solution to the problem is to make them believe that making progress one step at a time is the key to success.
● 参考译文●
如何保持健康越来越成为众多现代艺术作品的主题。如上图所示,一位女士吃着披萨和甜甜圈,喝着可乐,还在吃一颗标有”特效瘦身丸”的药丸,想着自己很快会瘦下来。漫画师想让大家关注年轻人中流行的一种自欺欺人的减肥方法。
很多因素可以解释该现象,但其中一个尤为突出。近年来,年轻人愈发急功近利。本科生希望一毕业就找到高薪工作,新员工渴望一夜致富。当怀有这种心态的人试图减肥,他们可能会吃减肥药或采用他们认为立竿见影的方法。
然而,这种急功近利的态度很难让人们瘦身。更糟糕的是,因为这些人对药物信心十足,所以他们可能会吃更多的垃圾食品,从而患高血压和脂肪肝等疾病的风险更高。因此,我们应该鼓励年轻人少吃糖和盐,并且多花时间参加户外活动。然而,从长远来看, 解决问题的办法是让他们相信一步一个脚印是成功的关键。
● 重点词汇 ●
doughnut /ˈdəʊnʌt/ n.甜甜圈
self-deceiving /self dɪˈsiːvɪŋ/ adj.自欺欺人的
mentality /menˈtæləti/ n.心态
slim/slim/ v.变苗条,减肥 adj.苗条的,纤细的
fatty liver 脂肪肝
● 5星表达●
引出话题的句型
…has/have increasingly become the main subject of many modern artworks. In the picture/cartoon above,…(描述图画)
……逐渐成为很多现代艺术作品的主题。如上面这幅图/漫画所示,……
指出寓意的句型
The cartoonist intends to draw public attention to …(名词短语:图画反映的现象/道理)
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